Apocolyptica

That all was nearly five months ago, five months of absolute hell. For five month Jake Edwards had survived the struggle of daily wasteland life: the constant scavenging of rotting food, the nights where he would lie with his hands clasped around a rusted pocketknife staring paranoid into the darkness.
Yet if Jake could survive the halls of Middletown High and endure the constant squabbling of his parents, he could make it through this. At least, that's what he told himself every day to keep his mind off the constant hunger in his belly, and thats what he told himslef as he had to walk away from that tiny six year old begging for food. It was a wonder how the kid had survived all ths time, but it was doutfull that the girl would suffer life too much longer. But Jake was going to survive this, no matter how long it took that fool of a government to respons to this "incedent".

I AM NOT CRITISIZING THE U.S GOVERNMENT, THIS WAS SIMPLY FOR THE SAKE OF THE STORY

Yet it was only when Jake heard the rumble in the distance, and felt the crash in his toes, did he know that yet another skyscraper had shaken form its roots and crashed to the ground below. And when he saw the wall of debries roll his way, he knew that he had deliberated too long. Battling through the constant storm of dust and debries he finally sank to his feet, exhausted, whispering his encouriging words to himslef and his life gradualy faded from him. Eventualy, he felt himself being dragged away, and the constant sand subsided its tearing on his skin. The storm muted, he raised his weary eyes upward, only to see a hungry six-year old girl staring at him with those bi, blue eyes.

I think im gonna have to forfitt these writings, they're kinda weak at the moment. but hey, i needed something to write, ya know what i mean? Thinking about a story more modern..any ideas?