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Sunday, April 19, 2009

Midnight Sun

'fricken piece of-" Jake cursed the broken water filter, only to be hushed by a sharp glance from his partner's ghostly light blue eyes. Whatever her name was, Natalya or something, had somehow managed to scavenge beside him through the long, dreary weeks. Not like he didn't owe her anything, after that near escape from death a while back. Like it mattered, she didn't really take too much food, and could get into places he couldn't..with a few nice surprises over the days.

Like this water purifier. If only he could make it work, it would supply him with fresh, clean water until..until..well, until it broke that is. Grumbling to himself, he tossed the case over to the girl. "see if you can fix it"he sighed, turning back to the three or four pieces of spoiled food he had collected in the afternoon: an overripe apple, a rotten banana and a slice of cake that could do for food if they couldn't find anything else to eat before dark. ripping the cake in half, he turned back to Nat, only to find her holding out a perfect, in-tack water purifier out to him. he looked around, trying to find the other one she had obviously thrown away. With a shrug, he traded her the water purifier for the slice of cake.
"i fixed it for you" the young girl squeaked after devouring her food, with a curious glace from Jake.
"Really?? Huh". he finished his food, and with a quick sip from the purified water, looked at her again. "Your a scary, scary child, you know?"

She beamed her angelic smile.

I think i actually got through my writer's block on this (wahoo!). i'm thinking on naming the next on either Iron Lotus or Ragnarok.

4 comments:

Sarah said...

Wow, your really good at poetry (even if it's dark - almost all poetry is though).

Sarah said...

Ahhh!!! Did I just do that? (The only downfall of having zillions of tabs open at once). Ok, that was for your poetry thing...

Your story is good too. What are you going to call it?

Devon said...

I have no idea...I'm thinking on changing the story a bit so it goes along the lines of:

the find that they are the only ones left on earth, the only other being Nat (AKA freaky child) who just happens to be a demon child who brought an apocalypse without knowing it...but is completely innocent and loving, and want a parent...who just happens to be Jake.

Kinda fits into that whole demon-angle thing. Sound Stephen Kingish

Thanks for the comment on the poem...gonna name the next Last Days story Iron Lotus... gonna begin just as they emerge from the bomb shelter.

Sarah said...

cool